Echoes in Concrete

Experience Writing Halloween Photography prompt: Take a picture of a bat, or bats, or something batty.
Photography technique: Turn something upside down.

These pictures are of the warehouse I managed for over 20 years, shortly after it was remodeled back in the ’80s. By the time I came along, it was spooky-looking and had character.

I was glad I missed this part of my warehouse’s life because it looked sterile and boring. In these old photographs, rows of pristine, uniform ceiling fixtures stretch endlessly across pale concrete, casting an overly neat, clinical glow.

However, I discovered that if I turned these pictures upside down and made things look a little batty, I could say—“Oh yes! There you are!” Suddenly, those rigid lines of light transform into the eerie, cavernous silhouettes and give this sterile room back the dark soul it was meant to have.

Seattle Warehouse
Circa 1980s
Photographer Unknown

Seattle Warehouse
Circa 1980s
Photographer Unknown

The Last Shift at Gravesend

Inspired by Experience Writing Halloween Flash Fiction Prompt: SCREAMS

Abandoned Victorian house marked “BUILT 1855” beside a muddy country road

AI Photo By WP
A.M. Moscoso

Nellie Fletcher lived alone in her little house on Fletcher Road—and by alone, I mean it was the only dwelling on a four-mile stretch of road that led straight up to Gravesend Mine. Nobody ever came up Nellie’s way unless they were lost and they were dead set on staying that way.

In its heyday,  Gravesend produced just enough gold to keep the miners and Gravesend’s ( the only mercantile and saloon was owned by Nellie Fletcher’s family)  dangling on the hook of one day striking it rich—though that day never came.

Part of the reason that day never came, or maybe a lot of the reason, that the mine was never really fully worked was that with some gold, the miners also found bones and scraps of clothing, and—on the coldest nights—the faint, rhythmic sound of pickaxes striking rock drifted up from deep beneath their feet and found its way into the head of all of the miners.

“It sounds like someone is digging their way up from below, ”  Silas Martin told Nellie  Fletcher’s great-grandfather Franklin. “That mine could be paved in gold, but the sounds coming up from the ground are scaring the men out of the mine. Something is working its way up from below.”

“The Devil, you say.” Franklin Fletcher said to Silas.

” Well. I didn’t, but that’s what some are saying.”

As time wore on, some miners held on and kept working as others fled, – they ignored the bones, the bits of clothing, the loose teeth, the charred bits of wood, and the sounds of pickaxes ringing up from below their feet for a while. If there was a ghost of a chance they could strike it rich, they told themselves, they were going to keep working.

So they kicked the bones aside and kept looking for their gold.

Abandoned mine tunnel with wooden supports, rail cart marked 1855, and mining tools

Artwork by WP / AI
A.M. Moscoso

The Gravesend Mine ended, without fanfare, on November 1st, 1860. On that day, a group of six workers went in, and they never came back out. Franklin, the sheriff, and three men from the saloon went into the mine to see if there had been an accident, but all they found were oil wick lamps running dry. They found miners’ tools neatly propped against the walls. They found the ever-present bones, but they didn’t find a single miner.

They went down into the mine as slowly as condemned men on their way to the gallows. On their way back out, the sheriff stopped the small group and asked, “Did you hear that?”

The men looked at each other, and then said, almost in unison, “I didn’t hear anything. Not a sound.”

Of course they heard it: the sound of pickaxes thudding and scraping against the earth, coming from deep beneath their feet. They ignored it as they hurried out of the mine, but later, each of them would hear those echoes late at night, just as they were drifting off to sleep.

And it kept them awake all the way to dawn.

Pickaxe and two lit lamps on a wooden bench inside a mine

AI by WP
A.M. Moscoso

Nellie Fletcher died alone in her house five years ago on October 31st.

As far as I know, she is still in her bed, covered with her homemade quilt. Her head is still turned to her left, where her now-empty eye sockets stare at the hardwood floor—the very floor that vibrated with the last sound she ever heard: pickaxes thudding and scraping against the earth in a mine just a few miles away from her home,  echoing right up through her floorboards.

Rocking chair in abandoned room

AI Photo by WP
Anita Moscoso

Grave Consequences: Discovering “An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge”

“An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge” stands out in the “Twilight Zone” canon because it wasn’t actually filmed as part of the show. Instead, according to “The Twilight Zone Encyclopedia,” it aired as an episode of the show’s final season after “The Twilight Zone” purchased the rights to the short film out of France. Based on Ambrose Bierce’s short story, the episode tells the tale of a man about to be hanged during the Civil War when suddenly the rope snaps and he escapes down the creek.

I don’t know how this episode of The Twilight Zone ended up being shown in my elementary school class in the early 1970s, but that is where I saw it, and lucky for me, my teacher had us write a theme about what we thought we had just seen, and I aced that baby.

I was about 11 at the time.

By the time I saw “An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge,” I had seen The Exorcist, Jaws, and a slew of House of Hammer films, and I was a Doctor Phibes devotee, but this short story, told with little dialogue and shot in black and white, gave me nightmares.

I remember the part when the rope broke and the man fell into the creek; I remember thinking, “He’s having a nightmare.” It turns out that is exactly what was happening. He just didn’t know it yet.

This episode of The Twilight Zone was not written by the Twilight Zone crew, but spoke from the heart of The Twilight Zone. It was a perfect fit.

Because it wasn’t easy to catch after it aired in 1964, it also didn’t get the love the more well-known episodes got, but it’s worth tracking down and seeing.

Also, “An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge” was my introduction to Ambrose Bierce, and I have remained a devoted fan of his since.

This is a neat watch for Halloween, so if you can dig it up I’d suggest grabbing a shovel and giving it a go.

amm

 

 

Cold Winds, Cold Fates

Experience Writing Halloween Challenge: SCREAMS

Photo A.M. Moscoso – October 2026

In a cold, windswept field under a vast and heavy blue sky is a pumpkin patch—a tangled mass of orange, gold, and green gourds waiting to be harvested by Grim Reapers in heavy winter jackets trimmed with fleece and muddy boots with cartoon characters stamped on their toes.

Some of the pumpkins have warts; some already have faces carved by rain and frost. Some are broken and rotting, slowly in the field because of the cold.

But the one thing all the pumpkins in the cold and windswept field share is that if you were to put your ear to the ground, you would hear them screaming for help—as you would too, if you were to share the fate that awaits them on October 31st.

Photo A.M. Moscoso
October 2026