I turned the prompt for an exercise from Writober called: Sensory Imagery into a flash fiction challenge. I might go back later and follow the directions because it looks like something I would like to build on. But what can I say, sometimes the Muses look at a prompt and say to me, ” you know what would be really cool? ” and I go with it.
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I saw an open window. It was in the empty house across the street from where I live.
I heard someone call down to me, one day as I walked by ” why don’t you come up, I’m home. Come in. Step inside ”
I carried my jacket, I carried my purse, I carried a ready smile
I smelled oatmeal cookies as I crossed the porch. I rang the bell and then I went inside.
I followed the sound of water, dripping into a pan, it plunked and sloshed and then drop by drop it died.
The crowded room, the only room that showed any sounds of life was the kitchen- it was painted yellow and well stocked with cutlery and fine bone china.
The slap of cupboard doors, crept through the air and slithered into my ear. The frosty breath said, ” Come a little closer, step inside. Have some cookies, my dear.”
I tasted those cookies before I took a bite, I couldn’t wait to get them in my mouth
The heat of my cheeks, turned my pale face an unnatural shade of red, I drooled.
I witness, I swear on stack of McCalls Best Cookies for Halloween cook books that when
I touch, I taste oatmeal cookies when I feast in this house and other’s like it. No matter what I find, no matter what consume.
I taste cookies.
This is so great. I love how you were inspired today.
I can see a story here now, but I have to say, I loved working this prompt! It set the stage for images and sounds and even smells. It was great.
Nice post 🌺🌺
Thank you!
Welcome dear friend 🌺🌺